martes, 11 de noviembre de 2008

Hello!

My name is Elizabeth.I'm 15 yEars old. My birthay is on the 7th of January.I live in Olot with my parents: my mother, father and brother. He is older than me. He is 20 years old and he is called Alberto.I love him.He always helps me when I need him.My favourite hobby is dancing. I love dancing all the time. I like studying but only studying English, but I don't mind studying other subjects, because I know that when I will go to the Univerity I will study what I like.

Well, that's all of me.

2 comentarios:

Cristina dijo...

Hello Eli!
You have written a good presentation. However, there are a few mistakes. Please, have a look at them and correct them ok?

My name is Elizabeth.I'm 15 yEars old. My birthay is on THE 7th of January.
I live in Olot with my parents: my mother, father and brother. He is older than me. He is 20 years old and he is called Alberto.I love him.He always helps me when I need him.
My favourite hobby is dancing. I love dancing all the time. I like studying but only studyING English, but I don't mind studying other subjects, because I know THAT when I will go to the Univerity I will study what I like.
Well, that's all of me.

Eli, your mark for your presentation is an A-. Well done!

ely dijo...

cristina! I have already corrected the text
Now I'm doing the letter that you told us to upload the note.